pitcher book

This is my book that me and my friend

This is my book that me and my friend made a book and this is a draft copy and we will like some feed back.

John and James were getting dropped off on the tops of the
mountain by Peter the pilot . On the way in when they were
in the helicopter they saw a big deer. It was so cool to see.          

John was late to the helicopter. James said  ‘’John come on slowpoke,
we will be late’’. James said “john your youless”Finally they were
organised and John and James got dropped off by Peter the pilot.
They unloaded the gear and off went the helicopter.

On the way to set up camp John and James  got up to a lookout
on the top of the mountain.  They saw 6 hinds and a big stag but
john was too slow to load the gun so the deer ran off into the bush.
 James said “john your youless”

1 hour later when they went to set up camp they realized
john forgot the tent so James made one because he has
a lot of bush skills.  James said “john your youless” James
used ferns and sticks off the ground. It was not the best but
it would do for the next 3 days.

‘Woof woof’ Lucy the dog runs off after a boar and she gets
cut up by his tusk before we get to her. John stiches the dog
up and accidently stitches the dogs mouth instead of her front
shoulder. James said “john your youless” Then James has to get the
stitches out of her mouth and put some on the cut on her front shoulder.

James and John go back to camp to let the dog rest up and they
go for a walk up the hill. As they are walking they see lots of sign
that a big stag had been there. Then john started watching birds so
James said “john your youless” Suddenly they see….

A big stag!

John line it up with the 308 and takes the shot, but misses.
James said “john your youless”  Luckily James hits it in the
front shoulder and the big 18 pointer is down.

James and John get to the deer. James goes to gut the deer but he is
afraid of blood so he  just can't do it! So John had to gut the deer
instead.

James turned to John and said “Sorry  john, I thought you had no
skills at all but you can gut a deer.”