Hello Connor. My name is Tyler I go to Lake Brunner School class Te Kinga. I like how you added pictures on to it. Maybe next time you could write more descriptive words. your work remind me of when I went sailing at Lake Brunner. How long did you go sailing for and did you capsize.
Wow! What a cool day out. Have you been sailing before Connor? Where you a little scared? I know I would be. It's great that you and your class mates were willing to have a go!
Looks like everyone had a lot of fun sailing, great weather to be out on the lake too! :)
ReplyDeleteHello Connor. My name is Tyler I go to Lake Brunner School class Te Kinga. I like how you added pictures on to it. Maybe next time you could write more descriptive words. your work remind me of when I went sailing at Lake Brunner. How long did you go sailing for and did you capsize.
ReplyDeleteWow! What a cool day out. Have you been sailing before Connor? Where you a little scared? I know I would be. It's great that you and your class mates were willing to have a go!
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