Thursday, 8 November 2018

motorcross

Image result for motocross at the starting line

The motors are revving, it sand like they
are going to blow up and the gate falls
back with a bounce.and I go the people
are fooling of and I just have to keep going.
I get to the first corner and I am in the led
so I can not full of now. There are people are
right behind me and number 38 is right be
side me so I go up a gear are get away from
him and I can see the finish line and people are
cheering and I win.the number 38 came's up to
me and said good race.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 09:19

    Hi Connor, Blake here. I like how you have described what it would be like at a motor cross race. I felt like I was really there! Were there any other racers? Maybe next time you could fix up your spelling.
    -Blake :)

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  2. Angus9 November 2018 at 09:26

    Hi, Conner I'm Angus from Awahono School. I really like your post on motocross. It is very very good, but maybe next time you do a post like this you could make your post into a slideshow so you could put more photos in.

    Kin Regards Angus.

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