We are have been Reading the 'Real Thing' in class. For writing we are learning to write in the present tense.
Here is my piece of writing. My next step is make it brighter.
Here is my piece of writing. My next step is make it brighter.
Fizzer is brave and helpful to the Coca Cola Company
he comes from NZ with his friend Tupai. Fizzer is the
brain in the team he is brave, but Tupai is a lot stronger
but not as smart.
he comes from NZ with his friend Tupai. Fizzer is the
brain in the team he is brave, but Tupai is a lot stronger
but not as smart.
Fizzer looks nerdy he wears glasses. Fizzer looks
like a stick man because he is so small in size.
like a stick man because he is so small in size.
Hi connor Jayden here I read your writing about the real thing and it is very interesting. I also wreckon you described taupai well becuase I am in your class.
ReplyDeleteHi Connor,
ReplyDeleteI love your writing about The Real Thing. Its good that your learning to write in present tense! I love your character that you have created.
Maybe add more detail about Fizzer?
Kind Regards
Noah