Hi Connor, I really like how you have explained where you were in space. It makes me feel like I was back and I was 6 how we had to learn about space and all the planets and the moon, and How the sun was just a giant star. What I think you can do next time is you can write a bit more on what u can see ,what u fell and whats it like apart from that it was a great story.
Hi Connor,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have explained where you were in space.
It makes me feel like I was back and I was 6 how we had to learn about space and all the planets and the moon, and How the sun was just a giant star. What I think you can do next time is you can write a bit more on what u can see ,what u fell and whats it like apart from that it was a great story.