Hi Jayden here from Awahono School I have read your presentation on the London Underground It is fluently presented and has a couple interesting facts about it. Maybe next time you could have a little bit more information and tell us what the London Underground is Also capitals and full stops. Maybe you should consider making the title bigger because I only saw it when I was checking for mistakes.
Hi Connor, well done finding information on London Underground. Do you think you'd like to use the underground trains? The closest we have to an underground are the stock underpasses the cows use. Next time check your words are laid out clearly. Mrs Hahn
Hi Jayden here from Awahono School I have read your presentation on the London Underground It is fluently presented and has a couple interesting facts about it. Maybe next time you could have a little bit more information and tell us what the London Underground is Also capitals and full stops. Maybe you should consider making the title bigger because I only saw it when I was checking for mistakes.
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Hi Connor, well done finding information on London Underground. Do you think you'd like to use the underground trains? The closest we have to an underground are the stock underpasses the cows use. Next time check your words are laid out clearly.
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