Thursday, 21 September 2017

Title coasters weather


More black clouds, not another day of rain! This was my summer on west coast.
It mucks up parents and families holidays because they have to change their days off. Everyone gets Christmas off to spend time with family.

If we change the holidays parents would not get as much time off.
If the holidays were changed we could swim in the warm rivers. We wouldn't have to be stuck inside we could be outside playing on our water slides.
I belie up above there is some reasons why and why not we should change the School holidays.

By connor
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous25 September 2017 at 10:02

    H Connor,
    I am Caroline. I am a year 8 currently attending to St Pius X School. I really love the way you use different words to describe the way you feel in your writing! Nex time I think you should check your punctuation. Keep it up!

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