The Real Thing

We are have been Reading the 'Real Thing' in class. For writing we are learning to write in the present tense.
Here is my piece of writing. My next step is make it brighter.

Fizzer is brave and helpful to the Coca Cola Company
he comes from NZ with his friend Tupai. Fizzer is the
brain in the team he is brave, but Tupai is a lot stronger
but not as smart.

Fizzer looks nerdy he wears glasses. Fizzer looks
like a stick man because he is so small in size.

Captain Underpants

In class we have been reading a book and I have finished my book and I would like you to check it out
My next book is 'Ben and Mark' by Christine Fernyhough and John Bougen.